Homesick

I'm not trying to bash on you - I'm trying to be straight with you. It seriously looks like you just coloured over it and left it like that. That in itself isn't much effort nor would I (and I'm sure many others) would classify that as art. I'm not against using bases, in fact, I've used a few myself. But to do this does not show your artistic talent, which I am sure you have! Next time, put more effort into. There are shadows that need to be added, textures of her sweater and shirt, and you could even fix her eyes and head, because with out the hair, it looks a little off. Have a wonderful day, and I hope you take my advice to heart.